My latest art journal page! I can’t decide if I like the blobby red line down the left side of the page, or if I should go back and “straighten” it up… What do you think?
Leave the red line> it balances the composition. I love the eyes as a prominent feature and part of the conceptual message but for some reason my ocd wants to shift or shrink the left eye to just before the tiny butterfly. Take it or leave it 🙂 I wish I had the guts to art up more personal ideas like this.
xmas65
like it as is, it fits the whole design. Don’t put baby in a box LOL
victoryrd
Thanks! Good advice!
createarteveryday
I like it, it gives it character. ?
victoryrd
Yes, character is good! I have to remind myself that it is GOOD to be a little loose and sloppy!
createarteveryday
Amen!
LLJ
Leave the red line> it balances the composition. I love the eyes as a prominent feature and part of the conceptual message but for some reason my ocd wants to shift or shrink the left eye to just before the tiny butterfly. Take it or leave it 🙂 I wish I had the guts to art up more personal ideas like this.